I'm taking my shoes with me
so no one can fill them
while I'm gone
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dwelling in the canyon of red sand stone we marked our houses with characters befitting our desires if we were sad w...
dwelling in the canyon of red sand stone we marked our houses with characters befitting our desires if we were sad w...
2 comments:
Wow. All of your poems and haiku's are very powerful, but I found this one especially so. We have all been there where we leave on some journey, whether it be for ourselves or someone else, to only come back to see that someone has taken our place. And it sucks /: But this haiku is perfect. "I'm going to take my shoes with me." Well done.
Thank you, Megan, I needed a little encouragement to continue posting. I'm glad you enjoyed my poems. I think you are the first person to ever visit here that I didn't know! Wonderful. Thanks again. Pattra
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